In Class Project User Testing

Alex
What is the major argument?
Pro-tattoo mindset through his artwork.

What is done well?
Visuals appear in rhythm with the music.

Suggestion(s):
Possibly add more color. I'm not sure if you're planning on moving away from blue and black but including a variety of colors might be helpful.

Chris
What is the major argument?
We aren't in control. Nature and time control our lives.

What is done well?
Narration over video with music. The calm tone of your voice along with the classical music adds to the piece and fits well.

Suggestion(s):
I agree with what was stated in class. A moment of silence would be a good addition to this piece. You could also add something you don't think the audience will expect to further illustrate that they are not in control.

Craig
What is the major argument?
A montage is a useful way of illustrating events that occur over a period of time.

What is done well?
Video seems to be put together well. Pace of video matches the pace of the music. Comedy attracts the audience, draws them in, and keeps their attention.

Suggestion(s):
I'm sure you will be working towards this but try to figure out your technical issue with the higher quality video. I think that your video needs to be well put together because quality affects your credibility.

Steven
What is the major argument?
We may not be sure what we're looking for in life.

What is done well?
You obviously have experience with film. Very well put together.

Suggestion(s):
Some of the dialogue seemed a bit unclear to me. This may have been my fault but you could double check to make sure there isn't anything interfering with the clarity.


Ronnie and Stevie
What is the major argument?
Be yourself and do what you want to do.

What is done well?
The interview style works well. The effect of having the "record" symbol as if this were a rough cut or through an older video camera is cool and adds to this style.

Suggestion(s):
The beginning text sequence was bright and a bit difficult to read. I would darken the text a little so it is more clear.