More In Class User Testing

Sarah
What is the major argument?
The main theme involves running from something; continuing and staying strong when you are tired or when you fall.

What is done well?
Good environmental setting. I also thought using a vehicle to move alongside the characters while they ran through the woods was a good idea.

Suggestion(s):
It may have been because you were having a bit of technical difficulty in class but it seemed like some of the transitions were choppy. Consider smoothing them out.

Greg
What is the major argument?
Copyright and fair use laws are confusing and lengthy and most people don't have the time or attention to read through and understand them. This site was created to simplify and educate.



What is done well?
The scrolling wheel at the top was a great way of presenting your topics. Easy to read and follow.



Suggestion(s):
I couldn't fine a "home" link that goes back to the welcome page. This might be something you could add for ease of use.

Kay
What is the major argument?
Son has grown over the past year. School progress.



What is done well?
I liked the transitions while flipping through the number/alphabet work and art work. Good presentation. Some of the themes from the music match what is happening on screen (swings).



Suggestion(s):
I'm unfamiliar with the song used in this piece. I may have imagined or misinterpreted it but I thought I had heard some swearing in the music. While I agree that rock music over a more tame song is a good idea, your audience (teachers, principals, other parents) might not agree that it is a good idea to use a song with swearing in it to present your child and his accomplishments.

Kyle
What is the major argument?
Presentation of himself, experience, portfolio, etc.



What is done well?
Cool logo banner. Good quote. I think it's a good idea to include links to things like NHL.com and Lids.com that subtly highlight some of your outside-of-school interests.



Suggestion(s):
Consider making the picture on the main page a link to somewhere even if it just enlarges it. I really wanted to click it.

Jifu
What is the major argument?
The player is talented at this game. It is a showcase of their skills.


What is done well?
Music goes well with the video. You seem to have some good videos of talented game play.


Suggestion(s):
I thought the piece got a bit boring after a minute or so. It was very repetitive. I would consider adding some depth to the piece. Also, I think a title would help clarify your argument and purpose.